TORCH OF FREEDOM — Snippet 13:

Herlander had glanced at Harriet for a moment and seen the mirror of his own intensely interested expression on her face. Then they’d both looked back at Fabre.

“The problem in this case,” the geneticist had continued, “is that all of our efforts to date have been . . . less than fully successful, shall we say. I’ll go ahead and admit that we still don’t have anything like the degree of understanding we wish we had where designed levels of intelligence are concerned, despite the degree of hubris some of my own colleagues seem to feel upon occasion. Still, we feel like we’re on the right track in this instance. Unfortunately, our results to date fall into three categories.

“The most frequent result is a child of about average intelligence for one of our alpha lines, which is to say substantially brighter than the vast majority of normals or even the bulk of our other star lines. That’s hardly a bad result, but it’s obviously not the one we’re looking for, because while the child may have an interest in mathematics, there’s no sign of the capability we’re actually trying to enhance. Or, if it’s there at all, it’s at best only partially realized.”

“Less often, but more often than we’d like, the result is a child who’s actually below the median line for our alpha lines. Many of them would be quite suitable for a gamma line, or for that matter for the general Mesan population, but they’re not remotely of the caliber were looking for.”

“And finally,” her expression had turned somber, “we get a relatively small number of results where all early testing suggests the trait we’re trying to bring out is present. It’s in there, waiting. But there’s an instability factor, as well.”

“Instability?” It had been Herlander’s turn to ask the question when Fabre paused this time, and the geneticist had nodded heavily.

“We lose them,” she’d said simply. The Simões must have looked perplexed, because she’d grimaced again . . . less happily than before.

“They do fine for the first three or four T-years,” she’d said. “But then, somewhere in the fifth year, we start to lose them to something like an extreme version of the condition which used to be called autism.”

This time it had been obvious neither of the younger people sitting on the other side of her desk had a clue what she was talking about, because she’d smiled with a certain bitterness.

“I’m not surprised you didn’t recognize the term, since it’s been a while since we’ve had to worry about it, but autism was a condition which affected the ability to interact socially. It was eliminated from the Beowulf population long before we left for Mesa, and we really don’t have a great deal in even the professional literature about it, anymore, far less in our more general information bases. For that matter, we’re not at all sure what we’re looking at here is what would have been defined as autism back in the dark ages. For one thing, according to the literature we do have, autism usually began to manifest by the time a child was three, and this is occurring substantially later in the development process. Onset also seems to be much more sudden and abrupt than anything we’ve been able to find in the literature. But autism was marked by impaired social interaction and communication and by restricted and repetitive behavior, and that’s definitely what we’re seeing here.

“In this case, however, it’s not that interactive and communication skills were never acquired, it’s that they’re lost. That’s what I mean when I say it’s like a particularly extreme version of the condition. These children actually regress. They lose communication skills they already had, they lose the ability to focus on their environment or interact with it, and they retreat into a sort of shutdown condition. In the more extreme cases, they become almost totally uncommunicative and nonresponsive within a couple of T-years.”

She’d paused again, then shrugged.

“We think we’re making progress, but to be honest, there’s an element on the Board which thinks we should simply go ahead and abandon the project completely. Those of us who disagree with that position have been looking for a potential means of breaking the existing paradigm. We’ve come to the conclusion — or, at least, some of us have — that what’s really needed here is a two-pronged approach. We’ve very carefully analyzed the genetic structure of all of the children in the entire line and, as I say, we think we’ve made substantial progress in correcting the genes themselves, the blueprint for the hardware, if you will. But we’re also of the opinion that we’re probably dealing with environmental elements that affect the operating software, as well. Which is what brings you to my office today.

“All our evaluations confirm that the two of you are a well-adjusted, balanced couple. Your basic personalities complement one another well, and you’re clearly well-suited to one another and to creating a stable home environment. Both of you also have the sort of affinity for mathematics we’re trying to produce in this line, if not on the level we’re looking for. Both of you have very successfully applied that ability in your daily work, and both of you have demonstrated high levels of empathy. What we’d like to do — what we intend to do — is to place one of our clones with you to be raised by you. Our hope is that by placing this child with someone who has the same abilities, who can provide the guidance — and the understanding — someone intended to be a prodigy requires, we’ll be able to . . . ease it through whatever critical process is going off the rails when we lose them. As I say, we’ve made significant improvements at the genetic level; now we need to provide the most beneficial, supportive, and nurturing environment we can, as well.”

* * * * * * * * * *

And that was how Francesca had entered the Simões’ life. She didn’t look a thing like either of her parents, although that was scarcely unheard of on Mesa. Herlander had sandy hair, hazel eyes, and what he thought of as reasonably attractive features, but he wasn’t especially handsome, by any means. One thing the Mesan Alignment had very carefully eschewed was the sort of “cookie cutter” physical similarity which was so much a part of the Scrags descended from the genetic “super soldiers” of Old Earth’s Final War. Physical attractiveness was part of almost any alpha or beta line, but physical diversity was also emphasized as part of a very conscious effort to avoid producing a readily identifiable appearance, and Harriet had black hair and sapphire blue eyes. She was also (in Herlander’s obviously unbiased opinion) a lot more attractive than he was.

They were very much of a height, right at one hundred and eighty centimeters, despite the dissimilarity in their coloring, but it was obvious Francesca would always be small and petite. Herlander doubted that she was ever going to be much over a hundred and fifty-five centimeters, and she had brown hair, brown eyes, and an olive complexion quite different from either of her parents.

All of which only made her an even more fascinating creature, as far as Simões was concerned. He understood that fathers were genetically hardwired to dote on girl children, of course. That was the way the species was designed, and the LRPB hadn’t seen any reason to change that particular trait. Despite that, however, he was firmly convinced that any unbiased observer would have been forced to admit that his daughter was the smartest, most charming, and most beautiful little girl who had ever existed. It was self-evident. And, as he’d pointed out to Harriet on more than one occasion, the fact that they’d made no direct genetic contribution to her existence obviously meant he was a disinterested and unbiased observer.

Somehow, Harriet had not been impressed by his logic.

He knew both of them had approached the prospect of parenthood, especially under the circumstances, with more than a little trepidation. He’d expected it to be hard to risk letting himself care for the girl, knowing as much as they’d been told about the problems the Board had encountered with this particular genome. He’d discovered, however, that he’d failed to reckon with the sheer beauty of a child — his child, however she’d become that — and the complete and total trust she’d extended to her parents. The first time she’d had one of the childhood fevers not even a Mesan star line was totally immune to, and she’d stopped her fretful crying and melted absolutely limply in his arms when he’d picked her up, nestled down against him, and dropped into sleep at last, he’d become her slave, and he knew it.

They’d both been aware of the fact that they were supposed to be providing the love and nurture to help ease Francesca through the development process, as Fabre had put it. They’d been prepared to do just that; what they hadn’t been prepared for was how inevitable Francesca herself had made it all. Her fourth and fifth years had been particularly tense and trying for them as she entered what Fabre had warned them was the greatest danger period, based on previous experience. But Francesca had breezed past the critical threshold, and they’d felt themselves relaxing steadily for the last couple of years.

And yet . . . and yet as Herlander Simões sat in his kitchen, wondering where his wife and daughter were, he discovered that he hadn’t relaxed completely, after all.

He was just reaching for his com when it sounded with Harriet’s attention signal. He flicked his finger to accept the call, and Harriet’s voice sounded in his ear.


There was something about her tone, he thought. Something . . . strained.

“Yes. I just got home a few minutes ago. Where are you guys?”

“We’re at the clinic, dear,” Harriet said.

“The clinic?” Simões repeated quickly. “Why? What’s wrong?”

“I’m not sure anything is wrong,” she replied, but multiple mental alarms were going off in his brain now. She sounded like someone who was afraid that if she admitted some dire possibility it would come to pass.

“Then why are you at the clinic?” he asked quietly.

“They screened me just after I picked her up at school and asked me to bring her down. Apparently . . . apparently they picked up a couple of small anomalies in her last evaluation.”

Simões’ heart seemed to stop beating.

“What sort of anomalies?” he demanded.

“Nothing enormously off profile. Dr. Fabre’s looked at the results herself, and she assures me that so far, at least, we’re still within parameters. We’re just . . . drifting a little bit to one side. So they wanted me to bring her in for a more complete battery of evaluations. I didn’t expect you to be home this early, and I didn’t want to worry you at work, but when I realized we were going to be late, I decided to screen you. I didn’t realize you were already at home until you answered.”

“I won’t be for long,” he told her. “If you’re going to be there for a while, the least I can do is hop in the car and come join you. And Frankie.”

“I’d like that,” she told him softly.

“Well, I’ll be there in a few minutes,” he said, equally softly. “Bye, honey.”

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52 Responses to TORCH OF FREEDOM — Snippet 13

  1. Nomad says:

    “A man should only think of how his choices affects himself (and should disregard effects on others)” and “A clever man should be allowd to work/advance freely without petty constrictions of morals or other lesser men” and similar concepts are the main belief of Mesan system. This whole (objectivism) issue is really headache inducing to discuss but in the books we see the perfect society created by these views. (the ruler has other ambitions but thats another matter :D ). The whole society shapes its people’s thinking. That unrecognised, basic arrogance could be argued to give the cats a warning that all is not well. (And also they do know that Men from Mesa are evil. There was at least 1 genetic slave who was adopted and Honor and by her Nimitz probably has told about the true evil amongh the stars.

  2. Peter Z says:

    I would agree with your points only if Mesan’s considered themselves, by virtue of their genesis, superior. I suspect this is so but I don’t know yet for sure. If, however, they rely on competition to separate the wheat from the chaff, then your assumption may not hold. Because their arrogance is overshaddowed by a true confidence that they are indeed more capable than anyone they are likely to encounter. They believe this by actually being tested over and over again through competition with other Mesan’s and non-Mesans alike.

    I do tend to agree with you, but hold out some suspicion that DW will not make things so clear cut. BTW, I am glad that you also noticed the growing objectivism/subjectivism thread. I thought I was overthinking things again. I have always thought that without some objective reference any subjective moral paradigms MUST resort to force to settle disputes. Pretty much what you brought up in your post.


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