Comments on: 1634: THE BAVARIAN CRISIS — snippet 41 http://www.ericflint.net/index.php/2007/07/27/1634-the-bavarian-crisis-snippet-41/ News announcements and snippets by Eric Flint Fri, 10 Feb 2012 22:52:30 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: Dave http://www.ericflint.net/index.php/2007/07/27/1634-the-bavarian-crisis-snippet-41/comment-page-1/#comment-44779 Dave Mon, 30 Jul 2007 14:55:16 +0000 http://www.ericflint.net/index.php/2007/07/27/1634-the-bavarian-crisis-snippet-41/#comment-44779 I like what you have written so far. I especially like the character of the old man and his comments. The first part gives one perspective but doesn't move well. I just see people talking and don't get a feel for who they are or what they are like. This may be because its just a snippet. You also give a good idea of what iron mining and working entails. I like what you have written so far. I especially like the character of the old man and his comments. The first part gives one perspective but doesn’t move well. I just see people talking and don’t get a feel for who they are or what they are like. This may be because its just a snippet.

You also give a good idea of what iron mining and working entails.

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